Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
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Well done Brodie, you have done incredible reading. Your voice is really clear and you have good expression too! I am proud that you made this video as it is a new skill and the first time we do something is usually the most difficult.
ReplyDeleteWow Brodie! You've done such a great job with this documentary. I really enjoyed hearing all about dolphins as they're such intelligent mammals. Keep up the great writing and blogging!
ReplyDeleteHi Brodie
ReplyDeleteWow it looks as if you worked really hard on this documentary. I agree with Mr Sutherland that you used a clear voice with great expression. Dolphins are such graceful creatures. Keep up the great effort.