Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 20, 2021
yummy yo yo's
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Hi Brodie, Lockdown is a great time to get baking :) These yoyos look amazing! What have you put in the middle of them? What recipe did you use? I'd love to give them a go!
ReplyDeleteHey Brodie! It is great to see that you are spending quality time with your dad in the kitchen and in the wilderness! One thing I noticed about your blog was that you were leaving out a lot of capitals and Grammar so just make sure to read through before you post:)
ReplyDeleteHi Brodie
ReplyDeleteThose yo yo´s look amazing. and I have also been baking. Me and my mum baked some peanut butter chocolate chic cookies.
Hi Brodie, It's great to see that you have been baking. I like the way you have explained to us what you have been making. I noticed that you forgot to put capital letters after two sentence just remember to prof read your work.
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